Snow Shovel Dilemna: Haiku

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Snow has fallen here

If I leave it, it will melt

Or freeze much harder…

 

It’s sad when you try to spin simple laziness into something deep and poetic, isn’t it?  🙂

13 comments

  1. I like it as well. You’re too hard on yourself. Haiku is all about recording a moment of insight by juxtaposition. You might try something like this:

    morning coffee—
    how long can i leave the snow
    parked in my driveway?

    It’s just an example, but everyday experiences like your own are revealing and poetic in their own ways. 🙂

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